I don't like how the stroke is around the date/time but not the band name. With that stroke I just kinda glance over the band name and look at the date/time.
The yellow that's on the back leg, it doesn't really look like it's dripping. It just looks like a yellow rectangle. If you just cut the edges at the end a bit to round it off I think it would fit in with everything else better.
I'd like to see some color on the right hand side behind the figure. There's just this strip of white all the way down the side until you hit the hit the thing she's sitting on. It just seems like too big a clean strip of background with all the splatter in the rest of the poster.
I really like this and it's done well.
ReplyDeleteI don't like how the stroke is around the date/time but not the band name. With that stroke I just kinda glance over the band name and look at the date/time.
The yellow that's on the back leg, it doesn't really look like it's dripping. It just looks like a yellow rectangle. If you just cut the edges at the end a bit to round it off I think it would fit in with everything else better.
I'd like to see some color on the right hand side behind the figure. There's just this strip of white all the way down the side until you hit the hit the thing she's sitting on. It just seems like too big a clean strip of background with all the splatter in the rest of the poster.
Thanks! I will do the corrections ASAP. See you in class tomorrow!
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