This is being picky but where the two figures chests meet there's a white dot and it just really catches my eye because it looks out of place. I'd make that a dark gray like the other outlines.
The line "It doesn't have to if you don't study" just sounds odd in this situation. I understand why you put that but maybe something like "Then just forget about everything else." or something along those lines. This way it still seems like a romantic line and in saying forget everything else that would include the fact that you have midterms to study for.
I would also add another tone to the ocean to make some waves or something like that. I just feel it needs a bit more. The moon is made of 3 colors, the rocks are 3, and the people are 2. I don't think it really hurts the sky but it makes the water feel really flat and like it doesn't belong. Actually now I see you do have a bit of dark blue in the water which is good but I think it needs quite a bit more of that color.
Other than those criticisms I think it's a nice poster and I like the idea behind it. Who wants to think about studying in a situation like that? lol
Now for the study poster:
The first thing I notice is that there's a very strong outline around the whole figure to distinguish it but there isn't a strong outline to distinguish the 2 separate legs. I can't decide if I like that you don't have one there or if I think there should be a strong line to show that. I'd suggest trying it and seeing since I can't really say more than "it might look better this way" lol.
You have that dark green in the bushes which I do like but the biggest spot of the dark green(across from her nose)I think should be a bit smaller. The dark green is a nice touch but that size and with it being dark just makes it more of a distraction taking attention away from the figure.
The only other thing I think, though this is just another "try this and it might look better but I'm not all that sure honestly" thing, is make that stroke just a bit smaller. I like having a bold stroke around the figure but I think that might be just a tad too heavy.
I really like this poster and I'm glad you chose to not add any text because I think that works for the best in this case. Great job.
Anti Study Poster- Good situation in poster. I'm sure nobody wants to think about studying during a time like that. I like the colors, they blend and go together really well.
Study Poster- I like this poster. No text needed and I get the point. Again, I like the colors of this poster as well.
{The 1st is NOT to Study. The 2nd is to Study!}
For the not study poster:
ReplyDeleteThis is being picky but where the two figures chests meet there's a white dot and it just really catches my eye because it looks out of place. I'd make that a dark gray like the other outlines.
The line "It doesn't have to if you don't study" just sounds odd in this situation. I understand why you put that but maybe something like "Then just forget about everything else." or something along those lines. This way it still seems like a romantic line and in saying forget everything else that would include the fact that you have midterms to study for.
I would also add another tone to the ocean to make some waves or something like that. I just feel it needs a bit more. The moon is made of 3 colors, the rocks are 3, and the people are 2. I don't think it really hurts the sky but it makes the water feel really flat and like it doesn't belong. Actually now I see you do have a bit of dark blue in the water which is good but I think it needs quite a bit more of that color.
Other than those criticisms I think it's a nice poster and I like the idea behind it. Who wants to think about studying in a situation like that? lol
Now for the study poster:
The first thing I notice is that there's a very strong outline around the whole figure to distinguish it but there isn't a strong outline to distinguish the 2 separate legs. I can't decide if I like that you don't have one there or if I think there should be a strong line to show that. I'd suggest trying it and seeing since I can't really say more than "it might look better this way" lol.
You have that dark green in the bushes which I do like but the biggest spot of the dark green(across from her nose)I think should be a bit smaller. The dark green is a nice touch but that size and with it being dark just makes it more of a distraction taking attention away from the figure.
The only other thing I think, though this is just another "try this and it might look better but I'm not all that sure honestly" thing, is make that stroke just a bit smaller. I like having a bold stroke around the figure but I think that might be just a tad too heavy.
I really like this poster and I'm glad you chose to not add any text because I think that works for the best in this case. Great job.
Haha Thanks for the help!!! I will keep that in mind for the final poster!
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ReplyDeleteGood situation in poster. I'm sure nobody wants to think about studying during a time like that. I like the colors, they blend and go together really well.
Study Poster-
I like this poster. No text needed and I get the point. Again, I like the colors of this poster as well.